Just IN- beginning of letter to you client

[Nemo1985]

I copy this in a web:The first sentence must get the reader's attention. Asking a question in which the answer is guaranteed to be "yes" is a good way to start. "Would you like to improve your life?" The opening paragraph, in fact the first sentence, should excite curiosity or attract the attention in some way that will make the reader continue to read the letter.
The most difficult paragraph to write in a sales letter is the first one. You have just a few seconds to get the reader's attention.Would you like to see your factory's production increase by 15% or more?Wouldn't you prefer to have your wedding pictures taken by the leader in the field?

[posix]

what, another viagra seller? great, just what we needed...

[Nemo1985]

Originally Posted by posix what, another viagra seller? great, just what we needed...

Sorry,but I think you have replied the wrong post!However,what you are talking about is really interesting.

[epineh]

Originally Posted by Nemo1985 Sorry,but I think you have replied the wrong post!However,what you are talking about is really interesting.

No he replied to the right post, and his post WAS interesting, yours was more like blah blah blah...honestly scam posts should at least be a little interesting, like those Nigerian money scams, at least they had decent writing.

Good idea, get on a machinist forum and post some blab about wedding pictures, that will impress everybody, maybe you should re-think your scam, how about some miraculous clamping system that will revolutionize the industry ?

Possibly Slot drills that never need sharpening and never wear out... I've got it, striped paint, and for the first 50 customers include a half an ounce of elbow grease !